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daemona Avid Muse Life is full of hidden secrets Posts: 216	feelings Dec 31, 2005 5:51:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daemona on Dec 31, 2005 5:51:02 GMT -5 So many feelings spill from my broken body but so little words.
	The line between wrong and right is the width of a threadt from a spiders web, the piano keys are black and white but they sound like a million colors in your mind~K.M. Omnia in duos;duo in unum;unus in nihil:Haec nec quatuor nec omnia nec duo nec unus nec nihil sunt~A.C. Is love so fragile...and the heart so hollow~S.N. Fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity AHIH AShR AHIH

Ken Corbett Global Moderator Reach out and touch a rock Posts: 799	feelings Jan 1, 2006 20:24:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ken Corbett on Jan 1, 2006 20:24:03 GMT -5 Hmmm.... 'little' is not the word I was expecting here ... I don't think it fits. 'few' perhaps, but then it is not strictly a haiku .... 'but no words are heard' if you don't mind me tinkering.
	My Secret River

Elle Rush Administrator Posts: 1,922	feelings Jan 2, 2006 15:57:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elle Rush on Jan 2, 2006 15:57:52 GMT -5 Intriguing and meloncholy. A wonderfully introspective haiku.

AquarianM: I'm so thankful for this quiet place full of solitude - and one of the best archives of my poems left online. Thank you, Rachelle for bringing me here back when you did. Oct 12, 2016 2:43:20 GMT -5

PoetOfSerendipity: LOL.. good! Seems I am most motivated to write when I'm feeling tortured.. and the past year has been great. Jan 29, 2017 2:29:25 GMT -5

Post by daemona on Dec 31, 2005 5:51:02 GMT -5

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Post by Elle Rush on Jan 2, 2006 15:57:52 GMT -5

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