david
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Post by david on Dec 13, 2005 10:14:35 GMT -5
Your words seduce me
silky friction on my flesh ...
speak to me again.
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 14, 2005 12:35:59 GMT -5
Oh, my goodnesss... what a poem!!!!!
I love it. My favorite Haiku right now. Awesome work!!!!
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david
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Post by david on Dec 14, 2005 17:24:18 GMT -5
Thank you, so much, Elle.
Coming from you, that means a lot!
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Post by Ken Corbett on Dec 15, 2005 16:21:39 GMT -5
I second that emotion, and the nomination. Mmm, "feel that silky friction", what a rhythm ... reminds me of an infamous funky tune of old I don't dare mention here!!!!
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 16, 2005 15:01:29 GMT -5
omg.. Ken, I know just the song your talking!! Play that funky music!
I didn't get that from it the first time around, but rhythm & flow, it certainly has.
Great work, David.
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daemona
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Life is full of hidden secrets
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Post by daemona on Dec 16, 2005 15:17:14 GMT -5
seduction indeed....seduced by those beautiful words... :-)
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jan 7, 2006 1:02:21 GMT -5
I really like this too.. and I wonder if the word "fiction" would also work.
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