david
Avid Muse
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Shadows
Dec 13, 2005 10:11:29 GMT -5
Post by david on Dec 13, 2005 10:11:29 GMT -5
Candlelight flickers
ghosts chasing ghosts on the wall
outside thunder roars.
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Shadows
Dec 14, 2005 12:35:13 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Dec 14, 2005 12:35:13 GMT -5
Mysterious and wonderful~Keep haikuing!!
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david
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Shadows
Dec 14, 2005 16:22:35 GMT -5
Post by david on Dec 14, 2005 16:22:35 GMT -5
Thank you, Elle  |
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daemona
Avid Muse
Life is full of hidden secrets
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Shadows
Dec 16, 2005 15:11:32 GMT -5
Post by daemona on Dec 16, 2005 15:11:32 GMT -5
some spookiness...and a little gloom it seems....
but then behind this there seems to be something else in this haiku....longing maybe? like trying to grap the shadows on the wall...but not being able to...and to that the strong thunder outside...like the answer of nature to this disappointment?
anyways...a wonderful one :-)
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