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Sanity
Jun 23, 2004 11:16:37 GMT -5
Post by Solace512 on Jun 23, 2004 11:16:37 GMT -5
Sanity:
All the petals have withered fallen to the ground They stain my floor like drops of blood, remnants of my broken heart. The roses are dead Is its symbolism as well?
Salty liquid falls steadily down my face staining my shirt with proof of sadness, painful evidence. I'm crying inside and out Is my maker as well?
Your letters are torn to pieces indecipherable, scattered randomly about, cluttering my room with lies. My heart is damaged and fading fast Are you as well?
I'm dying inside turning cold and black my mind is littered I need to find my way back to sanity.
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Sanity
Jun 25, 2004 14:54:18 GMT -5
Post by AquarianM on Jun 25, 2004 14:54:18 GMT -5
The last line "I need to find my way back to sanity" is a very deep truth. I think being in love is being partially insane when it breaks. Just like any obsession/addiction only more so. Great write.
Dan
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