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Post by Elle Rush on Oct 21, 2005 11:51:15 GMT -5
4-6-4
Falling Leaves
Jewel tones falling,
season's opening night,
applause and awe.
elle rush oct. 05
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daemona
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Post by daemona on Nov 11, 2005 15:03:11 GMT -5
leaves really seem to be a great inspiration  but for sure a good one...beautiful haiku..i´m eager to read more :-) |
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Post by david on Nov 11, 2005 21:51:31 GMT -5
The beginning of a colorful symphony.
VERY nice work, Elle!
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 25, 2005 20:34:02 GMT -5
You've mixed your metaphors, some might say that's a bad thing, but they mesh very harmoniously here, Elle. Colour, sparkle, music, appreciation, all clean and bright. Like David says, a symphony. Very nice.
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but for sure a good one...beautiful haiku..i´m eager to read more :-)
