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daemona Avid Muse Life is full of hidden secrets Posts: 216	silence Jul 14, 2005 9:57:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daemona on Jul 14, 2005 9:57:51 GMT -5 Drowning silence minds waiting and thinking or are they empty?
	The line between wrong and right is the width of a threadt from a spiders web, the piano keys are black and white but they sound like a million colors in your mind~K.M. Omnia in duos;duo in unum;unus in nihil:Haec nec quatuor nec omnia nec duo nec unus nec nihil sunt~A.C. Is love so fragile...and the heart so hollow~S.N. Fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity AHIH AShR AHIH

Solace512 Affluent Muse window to the soul Posts: 308	silence Jul 14, 2005 11:08:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Solace512 on Jul 14, 2005 11:08:55 GMT -5 another intriguing haiku! Bravo!
	"You are always already happy. The reason you don't experience it is that it's covered up by layers of suppressed emotions and negative thoughts. Shift your attention and your inherent happiness flashes forth"

Elle Rush Administrator Posts: 1,922	silence Jul 14, 2005 11:09:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elle Rush on Jul 14, 2005 11:09:47 GMT -5 Silence can be so uncomfortable.. or comfortable.. depending on the moment & company. Well-done!

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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jul 20, 2005 8:42:11 GMT -5

I love the total change in the third line!! I laughed! Sorry.. we take things soooo seriously sometimes, reading into things, overthinking them, when we SHOULD be just "kicking back" and enjoying the ride!

...or are they empty.. ;Dlol

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Post by daemona on Jul 14, 2005 9:57:51 GMT -5

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Post by Elle Rush on Jul 14, 2005 11:09:47 GMT -5

Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jul 20, 2005 8:42:11 GMT -5

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