Love's Garden

[david]

Come to me, my sweet
and let me enter
into your garden of love

Let my hands nurture
the lust and passion
within you

Let my tongue
till the soil
of your desire

Until your yearning blossoms
alive and full,
like the petals of an
erotic flower

Curling open gently
moist and warm,
to be savored

Inviting me to enter
the depths
of your love.

[Ken Corbett]

So hot and spicy I can almost taste it.

I might not use the word "some", try "an" instead perhaps. Some is vague and indecisive, makes me stutter.

Ken

[david]

You're right, Ken. Thanks. I'm changing that now.
And thanks for the good words, too.

[Elle Rush]

Whew!! What I REALLY love about this is that not only is the sensuality present, but it is in the presence of love.... the two belong together, but often get separated wonderful work, David!

[david]

Thank you, Elle. I think I was more nervous about posting this one than anything else I've done in MM. And you're right about the two (sensuality and love) belonging together.

I think back in my life and realize there have been times when encounters with the fairer sex were full of sensuality, but no love. These were not nearly as powerful or memorable as when both were present.

When it's right like that, it's a total bonding of body, mind and spirit. Mindblowing doesn't even begin to describe it

[daemona]

well as i already told you i think this is amazingle beautiful, wonderful imagery, sensual and sexual...
...great work!

[Solace512]

wow... what a beautiful and sensual write! well done!

[david]

Thank you ,so much, Solace.
Nice to hear from you again