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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 5, 2004 14:56:26 GMT -5
You are the untamed beast who prowls my steaming jungle. I spy you in the morning behind dew-laden leaves of leather, loping softly down the twisting trails of your territory, driven by your dark purpose.
The air of your passage is sweet, heady musk, that parts the portals of my passion and rekindles the smoldering flame of my hidden longing.
I know you will enter my arbor when the heat of sultry day is spent and birds lift turquoise beaks from under iridescent plumage to climb into twilight sky.
We will share each other shamelessly, shaping forms that shift and slip in and out of symmetry, until you regain the savage forest, to re-establish domination over your domain of chaotic fantasy tinged with brutal reality.
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 18, 2004 10:36:26 GMT -5
Dang!!!! This rocks, Ken! Is this new?? Holy cow, I'd say your muse struck with a vengeance! That 2nd stanza is Super-great. LOVE IT.... want MORE of it!! Get writing, darlin' This is striking stuff.
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 18, 2004 10:37:12 GMT -5
and the ending... exclamation!!
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Post by Ken Corbett on Jul 15, 2005 7:14:28 GMT -5
Yes, it is an older one that I reworked. I'm glad you liked it, Elle.
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