Roadpan
Avid Muse
The Essential Pegasus
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Apr 7, 2004 8:15:13 GMT -5
Post by Roadpan on Apr 7, 2004 8:15:13 GMT -5
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Spread, before me, rising behind, the moon & flesh, lilac harmonies, fingers pulling near, beneath, searching for the stars, pushing against each moan, each bead of sweat & glistening dance, hidden eyes wanting, hair-teased & teeth-scarred back, while grasping me, new arcs & slants, savoring fresh angles, torments of foreign fingers & warm tongues, leather candles with wet wax satin whips, enough to stutter, to press toward me, the drizzle of heated butter coming from the sun, blushing dark flesh around me, searing & daring to draw & seize deeper, the secret within me, gardens laced with water unspent & flowing to the low dip of back, molasses discovering a swift, sure current hungry enough to flow, with keen shrieks, toward the ravine where, spent- breath, you are, beneath smiles & eyes, spread.
Todd K. Bush © 2004
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Apr 7, 2004 10:18:47 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Apr 7, 2004 10:18:47 GMT -5
This one left me breathless! Something about the word molasses--- it's such an erotic word. The whole piece conjures such passion- Erotic, indeed. Sweet read!
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Oct 29, 2004 14:22:46 GMT -5
Post by leash on Oct 29, 2004 14:22:46 GMT -5
i love how some parts are quite vague.. they hint, but dont give you the full picture. leaves much to the imagination.
well done. thanks for sharing, roadpan.
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daemona
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Life is full of hidden secrets
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Jul 14, 2005 10:34:39 GMT -5
Post by daemona on Jul 14, 2005 10:34:39 GMT -5
i like it, it´s very sexy and it definately provokes some vivid images inside...
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Jul 14, 2005 16:19:46 GMT -5
Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jul 14, 2005 16:19:46 GMT -5
I've GOT to stop reading these at work!! lol.. GREAT poem... thanks for sharing!
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