dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
Posts: 25
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Post by dyna on Mar 30, 2004 12:44:46 GMT -5
First Meetings Drive
smoothing skin hand on thighs light caresses in the dim soft whispering sighs feeling heat on flesh rise
circles caressing soft and slow fluttering heart beat fluids melting...a gathering flow shifting...moving in the seat asking silently to repeat
a hand feels fingers move touching and seals teasing...tantalizing...not to soothe outside the window the world drew
rotating...caressing feeling the heat burn high lifting...pressing slow swirls on thigh moves away with a frustrated sigh
a body burns...not just yet deep inside the fires churn needs open...hoping to be met begging aching, a silent yearn holding back wanting to learn
moisture flows down deep inside palms rub while fingers explore noting...feeling excitement ride desires enflame...desires at war a body holds back while wanting more
slowly...silently...drifting around needs unfulfilled while I am led a body lowers...falling down hands clench and unclench above my head while hands of another kind lead me to bed.
- Dyna 03/29/04
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 30, 2004 13:45:46 GMT -5
Dyna, Erotic and tantalizing. I love the words you chose there: "needs open" as if previously unexplored, or repressed... also confirmed in the line "wanting to learn" - passionate & satisfying- a much enjoyed read. I'll be back!
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Post by Elle Rush on Oct 29, 2004 12:05:02 GMT -5
Came back for another reading.. as curious as was the first time. Enjoyed the read again!
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Post by leash on Oct 29, 2004 14:28:23 GMT -5
i like how you made use of so many of the senses.. it worked quite well! keep up the good work, dear dyna.
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