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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 22, 2003 4:58:33 GMT -5
prelude
…~The vibrations come to me elevated
when they come from you.
Vibrations
We mingle,
forgiving, limp body parts,
legs dangling comfortably,
in mysticism that spent us both.
Ensnared in this
possibility,
high on elixirs
eagerly drank down,
sucked in,
barren-well
in a sensual rain.
Never shall I forget
the taste of you
in fast and flooding waves
of surfing sexuality…
and how I ache in longing
to crash into you,
drink you,
give myself up to you
again.
Elle Rush 2002
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 22, 2003 11:03:50 GMT -5
The last verse is absolutely delicious. And I love the prelude here; it adds an intimacy for me.
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 22, 2003 11:39:40 GMT -5
"delicious" lol, that works for me! ;D I am glad I posted it. It's an older one... haven't written any erotica or romance pieces in a very long time. I believe there's hope for me yet, tho! At least I hope so  |
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 18, 2003 12:04:58 GMT -5
LOL @ the "hope for me yet" comment...... my how a day or two can change everything!
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dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
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Post by dyna on Jan 31, 2004 11:55:19 GMT -5
I like this poem...very nice.
I like the feeling it evokes.
Dyna
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 2, 2004 10:39:32 GMT -5
Thank you for reading, Dyna. I am glad you enjoyed!
Looking forward to reading your poetry, as well!
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dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
Posts: 25
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Post by dyna on Feb 2, 2004 20:19:32 GMT -5
You are welcome...my poetry is well...um...not sure. It flies on inspration and tends to have a solid rhymic meter. Cant help it. A rhyme in time I will give to thine...and so forth  not to mention titles? Why? some do, some dont...I just write. Dyna |
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 3, 2004 12:06:41 GMT -5
Some of mine do, some don't. I just let it flow. That's what we do, and there is no "right" or "wrong" way to write. I look forward to reading you!
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Post by leash on Oct 29, 2004 14:18:31 GMT -5
nicely done! i love the rhythm/flow of this piece.. its very natural. your wording is perfect! great write, elle. i enjoyed it much.
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