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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 22, 2003 4:56:19 GMT -5
Overture
He came to me,
on an unsuspecting night,
with an unexpected overture.
Rousing me to a curious peak,
with a haunting melody that has ever-since
played over and over-
seeming only for me.
He cradles my tenderness,
rocks away misery
to molasses- sweet dreams
in forbidden symphony,
where vibrations resonate,
and falling sound
tempts me
with a craving
the likes I have never known.
His pulsating rhythm,
a beast shaking cage;
he takes me over and over
to this illicit place,
where we share the same stars,
light of passion,
and the sound of music
fills us.
Elle Rush © 2002
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 22, 2003 11:06:05 GMT -5
Man, I wish I'd written this. I wish I'd written this and printed it up on some perfumed paper and slipped it into Andy's lunchbox.
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 22, 2003 11:44:06 GMT -5
AWwwww.... my goodness that has to be the absolute best compliment I have received at a poem! LOL- a bit more than just "wish I had written this" lol, HOW COOL!
I like this one, of course because I incorporated all of my fave musical references. This one just happened, all at once and very spontaneously. I love it when that happens. It's an older one, also. (well, about a year old, I think) I've thought about trying to work with it in a melody. I'll let ya know if I figure something out for it- & send it to ya!
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 22, 2003 11:48:29 GMT -5
Oooooooh, now that you mention it......this has a Fiona Apple vibe on it. Smoky, low voice and piano played in a rhythm that makes you want to MOVE YOUR HIPS SLOW AND SMOOTH.
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 27, 2003 16:50:38 GMT -5
Hey, you!! Ya just gave me an idea on chord structure for this! and VIBE-- I love Fiona Apple.. rock on!
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dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
Posts: 25
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Post by dyna on Jan 31, 2004 12:02:56 GMT -5
Wow...hmmmm
me like
Dyna
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 2, 2004 10:42:17 GMT -5
lol @ loss of words, Dyna.... the erotica forum can do that to us  Thank you for taking the time to read. Nice to have you here! |
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dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
Posts: 25
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Post by dyna on Feb 2, 2004 20:14:53 GMT -5
Yeah. Um...well...hehe. I like the sublety...innuendo...mine is much more...shall we say...graphic and in your face?  Dyna |
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 3, 2004 12:05:04 GMT -5
and, hey.. that's okay, too! When your ready, post away!
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Post by leash on Oct 29, 2004 14:12:55 GMT -5
exceptional work, elle. i especially enjoyed the last stanza.
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 5, 2004 14:54:12 GMT -5
Elle, tell me more about this illicit place. RRarr! I hope you never lose the way there.
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 18, 2004 10:33:49 GMT -5
awww... you guys are terrific! <blushing elle> has not lost her way -- wink afterall, guys... I do have a 7 month old! lol.. |
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Thank you for taking the time to read. Nice to have you here!
