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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 8, 2007 8:00:36 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune and celestial rhyme
hopes and dreams are borne aloft
Loves soars high, despite the odds
for the magic could fade all too soon
many souls burnt by those embers,
left in ancient ruin...
Can this new love be worth the cost
in doubt and pain his heart is torn
for all that's won, so much is lost
will this new love last past the morn
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 10, 2007 2:34:43 GMT -5
ruin for rune?? LOL..
I think that was actually a concluding line..
Here's a new one
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 10, 2007 9:07:01 GMT -5
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
devoid of stars to scatter faerie dust upon it,
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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 10, 2007 10:06:53 GMT -5
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
devoid of stars to scatter faerie dust upon it,
the future looks dim, hopes forlorn
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 10, 2007 20:52:09 GMT -5
My BAD! (the ruin/rune thing...) LOL that's funny. Sorry EEK!
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
devoid of stars to scatter faerie dust upon it,
the future looks dim, hopes forlorn
until twilight shines upon souls connected
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 11, 2007 1:50:17 GMT -5
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
devoid of stars to scatter faerie dust upon it,
the future looks dim, hopes forlorn
until twilight shines upon souls connected
defenses dwindle with the setting sun
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 11, 2007 9:09:46 GMT -5
True love it seems, never starts in the morn'
devoid of stars to scatter faerie dust upon it,
the future looks dim, hopes forlorn
until twilight shines upon souls connected
defenses dwindle with the setting sun
with hearts and arms wide open
the two fall into one,
creating their own earthly heaven.
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Dec 14, 2007 19:58:17 GMT -5
oh heck.. I love the whole thing.. I pre-recommend it for the next newsletter as an example of how poets can combine their work and have fun.
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 16, 2007 20:19:31 GMT -5
LOL, Okay, POS, you start another NEW romantic challenge in this forum  |
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 16, 2007 20:20:07 GMT -5
PS: I am not in the most romantic mood, that's why it's better if someone else do this one this time..lol
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Post by Ken Corbett on Dec 17, 2007 13:13:26 GMT -5
When did it begin
who smiled the first coy smile
who flashed the first shy grin
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 17, 2007 17:03:33 GMT -5
wow.. I love that!
When did it begin
who smiled the first coy smile
who flashed the first shy grin
With a wave of your charm,
a spell cast all-around,
I don't know if I am going to or coming from,
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Post by Ken Corbett on Mar 20, 2008 14:58:52 GMT -5
When did it begin
who smiled the first coy smile
who flashed the first shy grin
With a wave of your charm,
a spell cast all-around,
I don't know if I am going to or coming from
iw ish you were here
you're always on my mind
your laugh tinkles in my ear
i long to see your smile
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Mar 23, 2008 3:15:33 GMT -5
When did it begin
who smiled the first coy smile
who flashed the first shy grin
With a wave of your charm,
a spell cast all-around,
I don't know if I am going to or coming from
i wish you were here
you're always on my mind
your laugh tinkles in my ear
i long to see your smile
blown kisses
long thought out wishes
memories to make
ours to take
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Post by Elle Rush on Apr 9, 2008 9:21:40 GMT -5
Lovely & I think this one is done!!
Shall we begin another?
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