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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 2, 2007 16:24:06 GMT -5
Everyone help write a poem to be stickied here in the Romantic Poetry forum for the falltime. No Rules, just write your line. I'd like for everyone to participate and write at least one line, tho!
(you can add however many lines, as long as they are not consecutive) We'll all put in ideas of what to title it when we feel that it is done.
I'll kick out the first line:
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 4, 2007 11:41:53 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 4, 2007 13:10:58 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting...
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 5, 2007 14:23:18 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
LOL.. that last line has a mood that is a little more giddy than serious... but after thinking about it, what new love isn't?
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 5, 2007 18:43:17 GMT -5
No.. I like it.. new love is that giddy- butterflies feeling. I would add another, but I'll wait for someone else to first  |
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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 6, 2007 12:37:12 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 6, 2007 14:57:06 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 7, 2007 7:07:30 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 7, 2007 9:03:49 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 7, 2007 13:01:58 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 7, 2007 14:30:19 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune
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Post by Ken Corbett on Sept 7, 2007 20:25:15 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune and celestial rhyme
hopes and dreams are borne aloft
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 8, 2007 4:29:47 GMT -5
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune and celestial rhyme
hopes and dreams are borne aloft
Loves soars high, despite the odds
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 8, 2007 4:32:11 GMT -5
...but I REALLY wanted to put this in..
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune
an ancient rune
Thanks Elle.. for starting this up.. this keeps me in practice until my muse returns.
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 8, 2007 7:26:02 GMT -5
Okay, Okay...POS.. LOL...what do you think about this:?
The Sun seems to fall away, like the Autumn leaves
bright colors fading into night,
stars, like lovers-in-waiting
twinkle with delight
Gentle breezes sway the treetops
wafts of amber and vanilla swirl around
Bats flit overhead between the branches
Leathern wings flap without a sound
Two hearts beat in magical time,
words of love are whispered soft,
in heavenly tune and celestial rhyme
hopes and dreams are borne aloft
Loves soars high, despite the odds
for the magic could fade all too soon
many souls burnt by those embers,
left in ancient ruin...
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