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Ken Corbett
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Reach out and touch a rock

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helpless Jul 4, 2007 14:38:02 GMT -5

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Post by Ken Corbett on Jul 4, 2007 14:38:02 GMT -5

when you get that need
the fire ya gotta feed
you know inside she’s wrong
but you been waitin’ so long

you thought you were so happy
but all you were was content
your life turned boring and crappy
same ole same ole torment

you’re helpless as the threads
of your safe world unwind
and it’s all because you can’t
get her off your mind

Ken

Last Edit: Jul 4, 2007 21:08:23 GMT -5 by Ken Corbett

My Secret River

Elle Rush Administrator Posts: 1,922	helpless Jul 5, 2007 9:11:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elle Rush on Jul 5, 2007 9:11:17 GMT -5 Tormented and frustrated. This has a song quality in it's rhythm which I love. Great write!

Elle Rush Administrator Posts: 1,922	helpless Aug 31, 2007 13:03:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elle Rush on Aug 31, 2007 13:03:59 GMT -5 You should put this piece to a country beat!

PoetOfSerendipity Moderator Posts: 536	helpless Sept 2, 2007 1:19:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 2, 2007 1:19:13 GMT -5 LOL.. get out of my MIND!! LOL Great write Ken! Love it!

AquarianM: I'm so thankful for this quiet place full of solitude - and one of the best archives of my poems left online. Thank you, Rachelle for bringing me here back when you did. Oct 12, 2016 2:43:20 GMT -5

PoetOfSerendipity: LOL.. good! Seems I am most motivated to write when I'm feeling tortured.. and the past year has been great. Jan 29, 2017 2:29:25 GMT -5

Post by Ken Corbett on Jul 4, 2007 14:38:02 GMT -5

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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 2, 2007 1:19:13 GMT -5

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