made my heart melt

[Solace512]

the snow was perfectly white,
untouched and flawless,
glistening in the moonlight,
as i gazed upon the small patch of land
from my third floor window.
it reminded me of things i cannot un-do,
things that only i can maybe change
if i stay true to myself
and the feelings i have for you again
because i still remember when
you wrote -i love u- in the snow,
and made my heart melt.

[Ken Corbett]

Solace,

Sounds like a happy memory, the kind you have when you stay "true to yourself."

I like this, because it is written in clear accessible language, stays together, and doesn't ramble.

Ken

[PoetOfSerendipity]

It's amazing how many things can trigger memories.. even a clean slate of snow.

Mike

[Elle Rush]

Beautiful and reminiscent. and sad, too...
write it out!

[daemona]

very beautiful...i could envision myself in your imaginary...
it felt sweet and full of nostalgia...
memories of love always come back and capture us, don´t they?
but then i think i wouldn´t even *want* them to stop coming...