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Post by Solace512 on Feb 23, 2006 11:06:43 GMT -5
the tide of your love tugs forcefully, pulling me closer and closer until i helplessly surrender, and submerge beneath its crystal clear waters. it's a sweet surrender, leaving me breathless and gasping for air. you put your mouth to mine, so that when you breathe out, i begin to breathe in. like an infinitely bound entity flowing forth with the tide, we are one.
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 23, 2006 12:25:34 GMT -5
Gorgeous, sensuous and passionate~ terrific!!!
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Post by daemona on Feb 24, 2006 5:41:57 GMT -5
this is lovely...very sweet.. :-D
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Feb 26, 2006 16:27:10 GMT -5
*chills* *goosebumps*
Love the poem and the imagery!
....and there has always been something I've loved about the words "sweet surrender".
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