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Post by Solace512 on Jan 14, 2006 23:59:18 GMT -5
you treat me like a piece of china hidden deep inside the cupboard, too fragile to be used. i haven't felt you touch me yet i haven't felt you kiss me yet are you afraid that you'll break me? i know this love is new, but what are you so afraid of? put your mouth to mine trace my spine with your fingers interlock our hips don't be scared i want this i want to be beautifully broken in your arms
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jan 16, 2006 1:47:32 GMT -5
Solace... your poems always touch my heart.. to have 1st love AND passion.. that would be a wonderous gift. Very nice.
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Post by Elle Rush on Jan 16, 2006 12:57:32 GMT -5
YES! Take me, take me, take me! I love the passion and longing. You express so well.
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Post by Ken Corbett on Jan 16, 2006 13:26:12 GMT -5
Like a waterfall, gathering force, tumbling gracefully, irresistibly, to the climactic last verse ... which I really enjoy.
Ken
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