daemona
Avid Muse
Life is full of hidden secrets
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Jul 6, 2005 12:55:34 GMT -5
Post by daemona on Jul 6, 2005 12:55:34 GMT -5
okay i know i haven´t played after the rules with this one but maybe you like it nontheless  You question my scars searching for their origin your guilt-mark on me. Spread silence on all allow only the lies out why shock you with truth? |
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Jul 6, 2005 23:07:44 GMT -5
Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jul 6, 2005 23:07:44 GMT -5
RULES?? WHAT rules??  |
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Jul 7, 2005 12:08:51 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Jul 7, 2005 12:08:51 GMT -5
Yes, it reminds me more of a tanka-- you should try that form! But, it is poetic, none-the-less!!
I like the mystique of it. I dig your posts, Daemona. They are raw, they are true. Keep on writing!
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daemona
Avid Muse
Life is full of hidden secrets
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Jul 7, 2005 13:10:56 GMT -5
Post by daemona on Jul 7, 2005 13:10:56 GMT -5
@poet well i ment that acually it it has to stanzas so as elle said it´s not really a haiku....maybe a twoku... ;-) @elle i never wrote a tanka before so i first have to learn about it, but it´s something i look forward to since some thoughts crossed my mind today that i simply can´t put into haiku form and that i feel would loose a lot if i tried... and of course: THANKX for comments & help i truelly appreciate it  |
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