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Post by Solace512 on Dec 5, 2005 19:55:56 GMT -5
define me:
i dare you to define me, to put me into words. can you do it? can you describe and generalize me in such a way that is fitting? i'd like to see you try. impress me with your words, -your poetry- -your lyrical ballads- prove your love with sustenance, with some kind of meaning, you are affectionate in the physical state, but i want to feel it in my soul, i wanna feel the heat, -the flame- emitted from the ink, burning into the parchment, along with your heat-infused passion. dear lover, take me to new heights just with the movement of a pen.
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Post by Elle Rush on Dec 6, 2005 12:29:19 GMT -5
Words and even more so, inked words, to cherish again and again mean so much. Sometimes we wish others to want to express the way we do... Sweet notes of affection~ I'll bet your gives him the bug!
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Dec 6, 2005 15:36:47 GMT -5
Funny you should say that Elle.. that was my first reaction.. to try and write something in answer.. a duet of prose so to speak...
Solace.. I guess you do a great job of throwing down the gaunlet in this piece if my first reaction was to write an answer.
I love the physical aspect of a relationship (heck.. let's just say it.. I like SEX)... but, it goes from fun to magic with the kind of intimacy you're talking about.... or so I hear
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Post by david on Dec 6, 2005 22:13:39 GMT -5
You hear correctly, Poet This piece rings with intimacy. Not the flesh-on-flesh kind, but the intimacy and courage of opening one's self to admit that's not enough - of desiring the deep connection of mental, spiritual, emotional creative intimacy that happens when you least expect it, explodes through you and leaves you breathless. When that kind of soul connection is made, it's truly magical.
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