Sweet October

Solace512 Affluent Muse window to the soul Posts: 308	Sweet October Oct 27, 2005 10:12:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Solace512 on Oct 27, 2005 10:12:20 GMT -5 I fell for you like autumn leaves, in a tantalizing twirl of orange and red. One day you just blew in like the cool autumn air, and whisked me off my feet. My sweet October, I haven't been the same since.
	"You are always already happy. The reason you don't experience it is that it's covered up by layers of suppressed emotions and negative thoughts. Shift your attention and your inherent happiness flashes forth"

Elle Rush Administrator Posts: 1,922	Sweet October Oct 27, 2005 13:09:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elle Rush on Oct 27, 2005 13:09:36 GMT -5 Oh my goodness.... this is breathtaking. It sounds like the opening to a book... or a screenplay. It is tantalizing and longing. Fiery and passionate. A beautiful poem!!

PoetOfSerendipity Moderator Posts: 536	Sweet October Nov 3, 2005 23:37:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 3, 2005 23:37:47 GMT -5 ...that instant attraction... that giddyness... that instant desire.. I felt them all in this read Solace.. WOOHOO.. nice write!

Ken Corbett Global Moderator Reach out and touch a rock Posts: 799	Sweet October Nov 7, 2005 11:31:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 7, 2005 11:31:13 GMT -5 Well done, such easy rhythm, colorful images, and joyous message.
	My Secret River

AquarianM: I'm so thankful for this quiet place full of solitude - and one of the best archives of my poems left online. Thank you, Rachelle for bringing me here back when you did. Oct 12, 2016 2:43:20 GMT -5

PoetOfSerendipity: LOL.. good! Seems I am most motivated to write when I'm feeling tortured.. and the past year has been great. Jan 29, 2017 2:29:25 GMT -5

Post by Solace512 on Oct 27, 2005 10:12:20 GMT -5

Post by Elle Rush on Oct 27, 2005 13:09:36 GMT -5

Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 3, 2005 23:37:47 GMT -5

Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 7, 2005 11:31:13 GMT -5

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