little wisps of time

[PoetOfSerendipity]

little wisps of time

little wisps of time
precious moments
surfacing to conscious thought
unbidden, but welcome

remembrances of the happy times
the simple joys
sharing, touching, feeling, loving,

finding what you never knew you lost
an inferno of intimacy
two hearts
beating as one

[Solace512]

Those are memories that you will keep with you and hold dear. I really enjoyed this.

My favorite lines were:

"an inferno of intimacy
two hearts
beating as one"

[Elle Rush]

Gossamer... touching. Beautifully open & vulnerable.
Poetry.

[Ken Corbett]

This piece reminds me that memories are the most lasting and beautiful gifts we can make to each other.

I might re-consider "precious moments" ... it's a little on the cliché side. But hey, if you are using those words sincerely, don't change them.

Ken