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Jun 24, 2004 22:25:19 GMT -5
Post by Solace512 on Jun 24, 2004 22:25:19 GMT -5
You:
please won't you enchant me, evoke me, enpower me, with a surreal love, a passion. one that awakens, nourishes, and calms, the depths of my very being. you awaken my soul. because of you... I am.
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Jun 25, 2004 0:14:01 GMT -5
Post by grouchmuffin on Jun 25, 2004 0:14:01 GMT -5
Short...sweet...complete. I enjoyed this small ode to your loved one-very nice.
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Jun 25, 2004 12:32:45 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Jun 25, 2004 12:32:45 GMT -5
Passionate. I considered that this could even be spiritual. I like that ambiguous quality about it, whether to creator, or life partner- a passionate dedication.
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Jun 25, 2004 13:35:22 GMT -5
Post by Solace512 on Jun 25, 2004 13:35:22 GMT -5
Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
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Oct 30, 2004 21:00:16 GMT -5
Post by rerris on Oct 30, 2004 21:00:16 GMT -5
A nice piece of work that flows quite well and uses it phrasing well.
Thank-you for posting
Richard.E.
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Mar 16, 2005 15:35:58 GMT -5
Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Mar 16, 2005 15:35:58 GMT -5
Hi Solace!
I love this too.. I've read a couple of your other pieces too and like your poems!!
WOOHOO! Who would have thought such introspection could be FUN?
POS (ahh...errr.. not the NORMAL meaning of POS.. but Poet of Serendipity.. lol)
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david
Avid Muse
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Mar 17, 2005 13:07:17 GMT -5
Post by david on Mar 17, 2005 13:07:17 GMT -5
Solace, this one is especially touching. I had the same feelings that Elle did about this one - there's an intense longing attached to these words - in addition to an appreciation for the very special subject of the piece - whether earthly or spiritual. VERY nice
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Mar 20, 2005 16:30:35 GMT -5
Post by Solace512 on Mar 20, 2005 16:30:35 GMT -5
Thanks rerris, pos, and david!
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