Roadpan
Avid Muse
The Essential Pegasus
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Post by Roadpan on Mar 26, 2003 14:31:32 GMT -5
She whispers, like a gale, into my life, and her sunshine eyes are wrapped in rain: bijoux that fit her alone caress me in their demur.
She imagines me saying I am the happiest man alive, when I delay correspondence; I must insist that I am a poor mirror in these eyes.
Lest she bandies the notion, in the coda of my frown, that I gaze and find her less, she should gather these words: I am left in the winter of my mind
when I am unable to find her eyes, and my glower is not cheerless but resolute, for I aim to save these images for the nights when the fairy tale she is
pauses to administer the dreams enlivened with the spirit of these rays she claims so unlikely to fill a single room with desire, though they melt my entire sky.
Roadpan © 2003
Cause--sometimes--there can never be too much mush.
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 27, 2003 0:56:18 GMT -5
Oh, that last line is a kicker! What mush it made me. Beautiful!!
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Post by RamirezGhost on Mar 27, 2003 15:46:45 GMT -5
That second stanza is brilliant. Good show.
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 27, 2003 16:01:17 GMT -5
*swooooooooooooooooooooooon!*
The last verse is my favorite but the whole thing made me all mushy.
Miranda
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Roadpan
Avid Muse
The Essential Pegasus
Posts: 111
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Post by Roadpan on Mar 31, 2003 20:40:17 GMT -5
Everyone's too kind and I am undeserving.
But thanks for the smiles.
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