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Post by RamirezGhost on Mar 24, 2003 18:05:11 GMT -5
She is terrible and magnificent, her mouth too sweet to have ever tasted salt. Her moves, gentle and cool, whet my urge to lie inside her, let her pressure collapse my bones, bloat my skin so I am large and blue as her; This, she will not do— she must love me.
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 24, 2003 21:32:03 GMT -5
I had a hard time reading the font, it's just a tad too small for my eyes. But, I did get through it.... that first line is killer- I love contradictions, makes for very real, human poetry. Enjoyed the poem immensely.
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 25, 2003 16:17:57 GMT -5
I like all of the opposing images in this, especially the first line.
Miranda
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Post by daemona on Feb 23, 2006 15:40:22 GMT -5
to me this is a very deep piece....deep as the sea i´m tended to say ^^
i just love this line: her mouth too sweet to have ever tasted salt...
i´m not the first one to say it...but i also love the contradictions...especially when given a second thought one finds it hard to really tell anymore if they are truely contradictory or not...
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