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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 22, 2003 10:58:04 GMT -5
my Venus
your Mars
in conjunction
in the seventh house
we are
a constellation
of two souls
intertwined
I am the axis
you rotate on;
you are the sun
I revolve around
the heavens
ordained it;
we are
written in the stars
Copyright 5/1/01 by Miranda Rae
(For my Andy)
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 22, 2003 11:45:51 GMT -5
That's ordained, then! Very cool piece. I think I do remember this one? I enjoyed reading it just as much this time around! A beautiful love you two have, a sweet poem of that this is.
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 23, 2003 0:49:17 GMT -5
Yep, you've seen this one before. I'm glad you took the time to read and comment on it again. Andy digs this one too; the third verse is his favorite.
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 23, 2003 1:02:09 GMT -5
It's neat! I dig astrology. I'll bet Andy loves the third stanza- LOL What man wouldn't? ;D You spoil him, but it sure sounds like he does you, too  |
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Post by Roadpan on Mar 24, 2003 12:59:39 GMT -5
all that distance ... they come ... and two meet, abruptly changing lives forever ... in profound manners of the heart.
very nice!
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Post by RamirezGhost on Mar 24, 2003 17:47:58 GMT -5
Such an informative manner this is written in...there is no fat, no excess. Great read.
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Post by Ken Corbett on Mar 26, 2003 13:19:40 GMT -5
I enjoyed every line in this one. Love cosmic poetry! And yes, I've seen it before, and appreciate it even more now, Miranda.  |
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 27, 2003 16:03:11 GMT -5
Thank you, kind sirs!
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 27, 2003 17:53:38 GMT -5
Kenco, we've got to do something with your "cool Diva" avatar!~ ;D I'll bet you didn't realize what that was when you picked it! Gave me a giggle, tho  |
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 28, 2003 9:33:46 GMT -5
kenco~ if you need help changing that or with anything else- just let me know  |
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