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Post by Ken Corbett on Oct 6, 2005 8:45:54 GMT -5
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The red and the black bugs scatter in panic as the white-hot ray tracks across the sidewalk.
Some find shelter in cracks and crannies while others are hit, crinkle, burst and burn.
The smoke of formic acid mixed with scorched flesh rises to the child's nose.
He has mastered the skill of focussing the sun's light through the magnifying glass accurately and mercilessly on the helpless ants below.
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The people scurry as the bombs fall from the plane and burst among the hovels.
All, young and old, innocent and guilty, die in the firestorm.
Calmly, the bomber acquires a new target in his cross-hairs and opens the bomb-bay doors. He has honed his craft to murderous precision.
III
Let us teach our children that all life is precious and irreplaceable.
The seeds of peace and love cannot sprout on poisoned ground.
Ken
An old one I've touched up.
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Post by Elle Rush on Oct 6, 2005 15:34:52 GMT -5
and quite impressive. The comparison is one of the best I've ever read- very remarkable and striking piece, Ken. I like the organization and the way it comes together brilliantly, tragically in the 2nd stanza. Worth re-visiting for you, and for me, reading it for the first time, Impactful.
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