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Post by Ken Corbett on Jun 7, 2005 11:47:04 GMT -5
I know your ugly demon where he likes to hide I can hear him scheming on your other side
he only wants to hurt you poison you with lies make you doubt my virtue see me with despise
I've waited far too long to call your demon out are you too far gone can you hear me shout
I summon all great gods to be my trusty shield to fight against grim odds your swords with me to wield
for my fair-haired maiden whose soul hangs in the fray we march with armor laden to free her from his sway
let us steel our hearts raise our banners high when the fighting starts unleash our battle cry
as the victors rise the gruesome demon slain I look into your eyes we are one again
Ken
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Post by Elle Rush on Jun 20, 2005 22:04:34 GMT -5
A lot of power here.... Passionate. Keep inking it out- where the heart goes, so shall the ink!
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Jul 8, 2005 8:18:53 GMT -5
I'm not sure if this is haunted or romantic Ken.. but it's GREAT! *pauses to mount his own steed.. adjust his armor, and join the crusade*
Sometimes it's tough knocking down the castle walls we build around our hearts every time we get hurt.
Thanks!
Poet
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daemona
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Post by daemona on Jul 10, 2005 13:51:56 GMT -5
I too like this a lot! Shows off your wonderful talent as a writer
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Post by grouchmuffin on Jul 19, 2005 9:28:23 GMT -5
How lucky the fair-haired maiden to have you as her knight in shining armor! A beautiful read, O Warrior of the Heart!
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