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Post by Ken Corbett on Feb 25, 2005 10:48:02 GMT -5
My dreams of late have been of gloom. Once they were haunted by canyons cataract. Now it's the logjams that unbidden loom on blind turns and I've no chance to react.
On my dream river there is a magic place where waters at last run free round the bend. Where one can sense there lurks no trace of log jams nor alders with which to contend.
The stream is at last barely wide enough to cradle my boat on its sinuous flow. From here on I see round the side enough on the quick turns where dark waters go.
It's not the rocks and the drops that I fear. They will always be there, on that rest assured. May the rocks and the drops ever re-appear in flowing symphony, no sweeter music heard.
It's the jagged barbs of fallen tree's branch that bob and quiver in unflinching dread and reach out with tips both sharp and blanch to rip me to bloody shreds, thread by thread.
Ken
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Post by Elle Rush on Feb 25, 2005 10:54:46 GMT -5
There is a profound fear woven in here... something so beloved splintered. Intriguing and well-written, Ken.
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on May 30, 2005 2:09:58 GMT -5
I liked it too.... scary... knowing there are always pitfalls, but somehow sensing it's DIFFERENT this time.
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