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DRACULA
Mar 19, 2003 13:09:51 GMT -5
Post by hawkspoet on Mar 19, 2003 13:09:51 GMT -5
11/2/01
Dracula
a mere mention of this well known name
can stir images deep inside
bringing out our fear of death
lucious deep blood red lips
cold intense staring eyes
charm flowing free
mist of love
settles
in
hawkspoet
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DRACULA
Mar 19, 2003 13:13:34 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Mar 19, 2003 13:13:34 GMT -5
What a cool and intriguing Nonet!
This line is especially interesting:
bringing out our fear of death
A lot of truth to that. It is so great to read you again.
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DRACULA
Mar 20, 2003 3:16:37 GMT -5
Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 20, 2003 3:16:37 GMT -5
NONET!  I love nonets.
Elle is right; there's a lot of truth here. Mention of Dracula brings out a ton of very vivid well-known images for people and you hit a bunch of them here with so few words.
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DRACULA
Mar 21, 2003 11:50:50 GMT -5
Post by RamirezGhost on Mar 21, 2003 11:50:50 GMT -5
Nice form, nice write and a subject matter that I think many, myself included, enjoy.
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DRACULA
Oct 29, 2004 14:43:50 GMT -5
Post by leash on Oct 29, 2004 14:43:50 GMT -5
what exactly is a nonet?
i found the ending to be a little too abrupt, but thats just me. i think it would have been nice if you threw a bit more imagery in there.. but the poem is still great without it. keep it up!
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DRACULA
Oct 30, 2004 14:01:31 GMT -5
Post by AquarianM on Oct 30, 2004 14:01:31 GMT -5
You're right, the name is filled with expectations. ..cool piece.
Dan
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I love nonets. 
