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Post by willowdown on Jul 16, 2009 22:59:35 GMT -5
The smile of Death is sweet, His breath is full of roses; Beneath the Hill, where dead men dance, The circle is complete.
The eyes of Death are pure, His touch is like the Sun; Beneath the Hill, where all flesh fails, There is an open door.
The song of Death is true, It's music is refined; The harp Death plays is old as time, But each man's death is new.
The kiss of Death is chaste, His arms are white and strong; In Death all truths are magnified, And all lies laid to waste.
The love of Death is mine, I melt upon his lips; Within his bosom Angels weep, And all is made sublime.
Upon Death's breast I lay, My heart against his pressed; In Death's dark eyes bright stars arise And dawns a brand new day.
All Death's children sing Beneath the shadowed Sun; But when all suns set in the west, He takes them 'neath his wing.
The smile of Death is sweet, His breath is full of roses; Beneath the Hill, where dead men dance, The circle is complete.
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 30, 2009 21:50:30 GMT -5
I like this. It has good build, great tempo, I also like to rhyme in 1 & 4th stanza.. it just suits me for certain things. Dark, Beautiful & breathless. Thank you!
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Post by Ken Corbett on Jan 22, 2012 21:02:36 GMT -5
Cooooool, Willowdown In Death's dark eyes bright stars arise That's my favorite line.
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