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Post by ImaginaryShadow on Mar 24, 2004 18:56:35 GMT -5
Stardust
Through the fields of starlight As the darkness fades away When all the world is awakening Can you hear me calling out to you? Fire, water, earth and air Lightning, thunder, rain Join me in this dance The new day dawns And the night is gone Come sun Come storm Come darkness today To dance and rejoice Each tiny flower Every ancient tree Leave the earth behind The sky so far above us Is as deep as any sea So follow me into the grey Dance in the wind, the rain Just one moment to last forever Drink deep the breath of life And sing with me The nameless timeless tune One song So many voices One life we have together Until the endless golden sunset Reaches across the sky Laying us down to rest awhile Amidst the shining stardust Where we will sleep until the dawn Awakens us once more For tomorrow is a new day...
Tell me what you think.
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 24, 2004 20:28:15 GMT -5
Let me first welcome you to Mystic, Imaginary Shadow. Enchanting and rhythmic poem. Your words dance- keep writing & posting~ I look forward to reading and getting to know you through your poetic works.
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Post by AquarianM on Apr 3, 2004 15:37:43 GMT -5
What I think is that this is beautiful, dream-like, and spiritual. Much enjoyed.
Dan
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Post by ImaginaryShadow on Apr 8, 2004 21:47:17 GMT -5
I'm glad that you all liked it. It's my very favourite out of all the poems I've written. ;D
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