dyna
New Muse
see, hear and am silent
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Mar 10, 2004 11:52:23 GMT -5
Post by dyna on Mar 10, 2004 11:52:23 GMT -5
Okay - seriously nervous. My first poetry posing here...be nice? Please? Do you know? a person today yesterday tomorrow Do you see? a woman here there everywhere Do you want? a friend now then later Do you accept? a lesbian present past future Do you know me for who I am a person...a woman a friend...a lover Do you love me for who I am ...as a daughter? Dyna 03/10/04
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Mar 10, 2004 11:57:21 GMT -5
Post by AquarianM on Mar 10, 2004 11:57:21 GMT -5
Labels are for canned goods, Love doesn't fit in small tin spaces, Eyes don't cry without sad reasons, Yet all eyes cry the same, Dream your dream it's lovely and yours, I'll dream mine on ethereal shores, I've read your words, Brought me up not down, Your dream isn't my dream, But I'll second it for you just the same, Go live it kindly.
Dan ... going to title and publish what you inspired.
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Mar 10, 2004 16:20:38 GMT -5
Post by Elle Rush on Mar 10, 2004 16:20:38 GMT -5
Bravo! I really enjoy seeing inspiration. Dyna- I like your post quite a lot. Questions within questions & some I can feel have only just begun to touch the surface. Keep asking- nice work. I look forward to more poetry from you now that you have dipped your toe in to test the waters~ Dan, I dig your reply & poem, also! Thought that was really cool and I love it when it happens so spontaneously.
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Mar 12, 2004 16:09:25 GMT -5
Post by Ken Corbett on Mar 12, 2004 16:09:25 GMT -5
Yes Dyna, I do! I do like your direct approach, cut right to the chase without dancing around.
I've been watching for you to step up and publish, and I hope to see more soon.
Ken
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