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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 20, 2003 14:21:10 GMT -5
Ripples haiku
Ripples travel from depths of hard waters envelops all.
elle rush © 2002
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 21, 2003 1:46:20 GMT -5
This is so true! The ripples just go and go and go, getting bigger and bigger and bigger.
I like how haiku says so much with so few words and syllables.
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 21, 2003 2:42:48 GMT -5
This is another that strays from the conventional 5-7-5 pattern... this is a 4-6-4.. Basically, any equation is acceptable to those that part from the conventional... I also adore this form. Minimalistic and yet complex and impactful with the right words... what I love most about it is the naturistic and peacefulness of it.. Thank you for enjoying!
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