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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 18, 2003 7:47:47 GMT -5
Hallowed (haiku)
Wax melts unnoticed, paraffin mountains erupt ceremoniously.
elle rush 2002
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Post by Randacello (MirandaRae) on Mar 20, 2003 3:09:21 GMT -5
I had to look up paraffin in the dictionary but that's a decent Scrabble word so I don't mind. LOL
I'll admit I don't really understand this one but it's fun to read it out loud. The words sound great together. I saw a little bit of opposing images here; the wax is melting away with no one noticing in the first line but the last two lines are very dramatic obvious fiery pictures for me (the word 'erupt' brought those images to mind).
I like this one!
Miranda
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Post by Elle Rush on Mar 20, 2003 11:04:35 GMT -5
This IS a strange one...lol. I burn candles when I meditate, that is where this came from, if that helps... I just love Haiku. Thanks for reading and for the neat commentary!
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