daemona
Avid Muse
Life is full of hidden secrets
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Post by daemona on Nov 14, 2005 12:14:25 GMT -5
So close yet so far
you left me talking to the
frost on the park bench
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 15, 2005 13:48:04 GMT -5
frost on the park bench
leaves glide like bats in the dusk
sun sets all too soon
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 15, 2005 19:31:29 GMT -5
Sun sets all too soon,
new moons orbit the night skies,
bringing new sunrise.
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david
Avid Muse
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Post by david on Nov 16, 2005 16:09:05 GMT -5
Bringing new sunrise
the day is newborn and still
it's secrets untold
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 17, 2005 9:26:33 GMT -5
its secrets untold
I strive to find the answers
will this be the day
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daemona
Avid Muse
Life is full of hidden secrets
Posts: 216
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Post by daemona on Nov 17, 2005 13:39:03 GMT -5
Will this be the day,
on which snow will cover all,
feelings of lost love.
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david
Avid Muse
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Post by david on Nov 17, 2005 14:19:33 GMT -5
Feelings of lost love
like snowdrifts upon my heart
smothering my soul
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 17, 2005 17:07:40 GMT -5
Nice work, daemona, david.
smothering my soul
bludgeoning my hopes, my dreams
leaving empty shell
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david
Avid Muse
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Post by david on Nov 17, 2005 18:22:34 GMT -5
Leaving empty shell
you walk away with my heart
clutched in your cold hands
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 18, 2005 16:22:42 GMT -5
clutched in your cold hands,
emptiness unfolds within,
freezes inside-out.
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david
Avid Muse
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Post by david on Nov 19, 2005 18:19:58 GMT -5
Freezes inside-out
my soul radiates sorrow
leaving my heart numb.
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 20, 2005 9:48:49 GMT -5
leaving my heart numb
I doubt my will to survive
if you spurn my love
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