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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 2, 2007 16:26:43 GMT -5
Let's write a community SEXY poem where everyone adds one word to the next--- whatever the word before yours makes you think of-- write it!
Let's see where this goes...lol
Piece-work Poem word-by-word:
Smoldering
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 4, 2007 9:14:04 GMT -5
Smoldering embers
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 4, 2007 13:13:51 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Sept 7, 2007 9:26:53 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
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Post by Elle Rush on Sept 7, 2007 14:29:36 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 1, 2007 2:48:46 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 1, 2007 12:31:54 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
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Post by Ken Corbett on Nov 2, 2007 11:02:47 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
Fingers
Just a little aside here ....
Have you ever noticed that when people write about female body parts, it's considered sexy
and risqué (see "Budding nipples flower") ... but if you write about a man's body parts, it's considered perv and grody?
Why is that?
Ken
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 2, 2007 12:24:57 GMT -5
LOL Ken... good point.... I dunno.. Elle??
btw.. thanks for leaving me the easy one to add..
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
Fingers dance
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 6, 2007 13:45:09 GMT -5
Haa! I have no idea, but honestly, I do think there is a greater reverence/ sacredness about a woman's body.. stemming from the fact that we create/incubate life within us... Just adore the Goddess form & don't question it, boys! LOL AND.. I might add, that I certainly have appreciation for masculine form, as well  I just wouldn't describe it with flowers... it's more like protective, steely, towering... smoldering embers, fiery ruby Budding nipples flower Fingers dance, to passion's music... I know, I wrote 3 words...lol I'm cheating at my own challenge! lol |
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 6, 2007 20:49:05 GMT -5
I know, I wrote 3 words...lol I'm cheating at my own challenge! lol LOL.. yes you ARE a cheater.. you are also hilarious.. but I kinda like the steely, tower, protective, role! ;D ...as you know, cheating begets cheating... so I'm going to go to the PREVIOUS line and add 2 words.. which actually gives me an idea for a challenge someday. smoldering embers, fiery ruby Budding nipples flower Fingers dance in tune to passion's music... The idea for a future challenge is (so I don't forget): A poem that I love the idea of, but never felt I got it right, each person will change a line, or add a verse, or delete one.. until no one wants to make changes. |
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 7, 2007 18:11:07 GMT -5
That's a very good idea! Next challenge... we'll close this one out when we feel it's finished  |
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 8, 2007 0:33:32 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
Fingers dance in tune
to passion's music...
Whispering
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Post by Elle Rush on Nov 9, 2007 13:26:03 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
Fingers dance in tune
to passion's music...
Whispering pleasure
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Post by PoetOfSerendipity on Nov 11, 2007 22:04:19 GMT -5
smoldering embers, fiery ruby
Budding nipples flower
Fingers dance in tune
to passion's music...
Whispering pleasure
a siren's
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I just wouldn't describe it with flowers... it's more like protective, steely, towering... 